Wednesday, June 27, 2018

healthy streams


What we learned about healthy streams

I liked looking for the freshwater creatures in the stream and the thing that was challenging was getting them
and finding them. It was hard looking for them because they are small and some of them looked the the
leafs so it was really hard to see them
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  1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2018 at 10:13 AM


    Kia ora, I am Bonnie from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked that you described everything on the post about freshwater creatures
    I learnt that finding freshwater creatures was a difficult task
    Maybe you could use more punctuation but overall a great piece of writing
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://gisintbonniew.blogspot.com/
    Mā te wā
    Bonnie

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