what i need to work on

this is  what i think i need to work on for writing

i think i need to work on for reading is working on my frequency and work on my tongue twisters which can be very difficult and can sound absolutely weird.

alliteration

This is a piece of writing I completed this week. It was focused on writing ALLITERATIONS.

Something sweet and juicy

sitting in the hot glazing sun with my feet in the hot sand watching the cold ocean water while the sun brightness shines on the ocean.

it's pretty hot outside in the sun it makes me want something sweet and juicy what should i eat.what about an ice block or even a slice of apple now that would be nice.

Or how about some ice cream and a slice of a juicy orange delicious.

First i eat my orange and then i eat my ice cream it was yummy.I then dip my toes into the cold ocean water and stare far far away in the ocean.