Something sweet and juicy
sitting in the hot glazing sun with my feet in the hot sand watching the cold ocean water while the sun brightness shines on the ocean.
it's pretty hot outside in the sun it makes me want something sweet and juicy what should i eat.what about an ice block or even a slice of apple now that would be nice.
Or how about some ice cream and a slice of a juicy orange delicious.
First i eat my orange and then i eat my ice cream it was yummy.I then dip my toes into the cold ocean water and stare far far away in the ocean.
No comments:
Post a Comment
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.